Please help me with this song

this is an unfinished song for a forthcoming built to spill cover album. It sucks so far

zoe blowing on my stomach while I'm singint amreica the beatiful

Nigel Planer is a good and non-litigous man, he is he is

A crisp20 dollar bill, the smell of a dog on the beach, this is no reason to live

wow newgrounds really robs audio files whenit down converts them. Butit's freee! you here

green rubber glove